Comments on: Excerpt Monday

By: Victoria Dixon

Victoria Dixon — Wed, 12 Aug 2009 00:53:03 +0000

Great use of language and humor! I chuckled.

By: Ansha Kotyk

Ansha Kotyk — Tue, 11 Aug 2009 12:35:08 +0000

I love Tea Break. It has a wonderful sound to it. Great job!

By: Kinsey Holley » It’s Excerpt Monday AGAIN?

Kinsey Holley » It’s Excerpt Monday AGAIN? — Mon, 10 Aug 2009 23:32:23 +0000

[...] AJ O’Donovan, Poetry (PG13) Stephanie Draven, Paranormal Romance (PG 13) Heather S.Ingemar, Dark Fantasy/Poetry (PG13) Babette James, Fantasy Romance (PG 13) Cynthia Justlin, Romantic Suspense (PG 13) Kaige, Historical Romance (PG 13) Julia Knight, Fantasy Romance (PG13) Ansha Kotyk, Middle Grade Adventure (PG13) Adelle Laudan, Contemporary Romance (PG 13) Jeannie Lin, Historical Romance (PG 13) RF Long, YA Paranormal (PG13) Caitlynn Lowe, Epic Fantasy (PG13) Shawntelle Madison, Paranormal Romance (PG 13) Crista McHugh, Contemporary Erotic Romance (PG 13) Bria Quinlan, Rom Com (PG) Leigh Royals, Historical Romance (PG 13) Megan S., Paranormal (PG13) Dara Sorensen, Historical Paranormal (PG 13) Bethanne Strasser, Historical Romance (PG13) [...]

By: Maya Doyle

Maya Doyle — Mon, 10 Aug 2009 22:28:30 +0000

Very lovely, AJ! Tea Break was also my favorite.

By: Adelle Laudan

Adelle Laudan — Mon, 10 Aug 2009 18:39:33 +0000

These are all lovely. I especially liked Tea Break. I posted a poem this week as well. Hope to cya there!

By: Caitlynn

Caitlynn — Mon, 10 Aug 2009 17:58:10 +0000

I enjoyed reading those! They were all good, but I think my favorite was “Tea Break”…I especially loved the last line.

By: Dawn Montgomery

Dawn Montgomery — Mon, 10 Aug 2009 17:48:24 +0000

Beautiful pieces! I love that you told a story after each of them. Thank you for sharing!

By: Ilona

Ilona — Mon, 10 Aug 2009 17:44:22 +0000

Well done Ayla. I like the ones you picked to show us.

By: Dara

Dara — Mon, 10 Aug 2009 15:41:49 +0000

Great poetry! I definitely admire people who can write it; anytime I’ve tried it always sounds forced. Not the case here! I’m particularly fond of the one about the museum. I look forward to more in the future!

By: Cate Hart

Cate Hart — Mon, 10 Aug 2009 15:22:56 +0000

Nice poetry. Welcome to EM!